Back to the story archive

An arena chronicle

Nofuqus Given VS Korutsuki Raizen

The training hall's mirrors caught him first—a screaming smear of brown against clean glass, white briefs stark beneath the filth, and Nofuqus Given announced himself with a wet,…

5 min readFiled
Nofuqus Given, a character in Nofuqus Given VS Korutsuki RaizenKorutsuki Raizen, a character in Nofuqus Given VS Korutsuki Raizen

Characters in this tale

Nofuqus GivenView the character sagaKorutsuki Raizen
The story

The training hall's mirrors caught him first—a screaming smear of brown against clean glass, white briefs stark beneath the filth, and Nofuqus Given announced himself with a wet, delighted cackle that bounced off the wooden floorboards.

"Knock knock! No door! Just—" he slapped his own thigh, and a chunk of the viscous coating flung loose and hit a curtain, "—*splat*. You get it. You get it, right? Clean guy? Tall dark brooding clean guy?"

Korutsuki Raizen did not answer. He stood at the center of the floor, boots planted, white-wrapped fists already raised in a loose guard. His eyes tracked Nofuqus without flinching—no disgust breaking his expression, no recoil. Just a slow, measured breath through the nose. The mirror behind him reflected the scene without prejudice.

"That's the thing about you," Nofuqus said, tilting his head so far it nearly touched his shoulder. "You've already decided you can win. I can *smell* it. Like soap. Like discipline. Disgusting."

Still nothing. Raizen shifted his weight, one foot sliding back an inch. A fighter's economy. He was reading the distance, the floor, the way Nofuqus's footing left greasy prints on the wood.

Nofuqus lunged.

Not a strike—a *spray*. He spun, arms flung wide, and flung arcs of filth across the polished floor. It landed in streaks and pools, and his own bare heels skidded through them as he came at Raizen in a stumbling rush, mouth open in a shriek of glee.

Raizen moved. Precise, minimal—a pivot that took him off the contaminated line, and a straight right that punched clean through the air where Nofuqus's skull had been. The wrapped knuckles cracked against nothing. Nofuqus cackled, ducked low, and *embraced* the follow-up elbow that Raizen threw, letting it bury into his shoulder. The blow landed hard enough to make him grunt, but he wrapped both arms around Raizen's forearm and held on.

"Gotcha. Gotcha gotcha gotcha—"

Raizen did not panic. He planted his feet, coiled, and drove his free hand into Nofuqus's ribs—once, twice, three times, each impact a dull, wet thud. Nofuqus wheezed, laughed, and squeezed tighter. The filth on his body smeared up Raizen's sleeve, across the white bandages, into the seams of the black coat. It was warm. It clung.

And then Raizen understood.

He tried to pull his arm back, and it came—sluggishly, trailing strings. His grip felt wrong. The bandages that should have been dry and tight were slick, and the slickness was spreading up toward his wrist, his palm, the very knuckles he trusted to end this.

"You feel it now," Nofuqus whispered, breathless, childlike. "That's the flavor. That's the *taste* of winning. Go on. Throw the punch. Throw your best one."

Raizen's jaw tightened. He threw it—a full-commitment left hook, every ounce of trained body behind it. It connected with Nofuqus's jaw and sent a spray of filth across the mirror. Nofuqus's head snapped sideways. He did not fall. He laughed, and the laugh was wet and wrong, and his arms cinched tighter around Raizen's trapped right arm.

The filth had reached Raizen's elbow. It was in the wrap, in the crease of the joint, and it was *thick*—not slipping, but seizing. Every servo of muscle and tendon that Raizen tried to fire came back gummed and slow. He wrenched his torso, threw a knee into Nofuqus's thigh, felt the impact absorb like punching mud. Nofuqus only pressed closer, plastering himself against Raizen's chest, coating the black high-collar shirt, the metal belt buckle, the very posture of a fighter mid-strike.

"See, here's the joke," Nofuqus murmured, almost tender. "You're already in your winning pose. Fist up. Chin down. Beautiful form. *Perfect* form. And you can't move it. Victory posture, locked. That's the whole bit. You won so hard you froze."

Raizen's eyes went wide—the first crack in the cold mask. He tried to step back and his boot would not lift from the floor; the filth had pooled and set beneath it, tacky and immovable. He tried to lower his guard and his arms stayed where they were, wrapped and weighted, locked into the exact geometry of a finishing blow that would never land. His breath came faster. The mirrors showed him from every angle: a perfect fighter, perfectly still, glazed in brown.

Nofuqus stepped back and admired his work, hands on his hips, tilting his head at the frozen silhouette. "Look at you. Still clean underneath, probably. Still disciplined. Still *sure*. And none of it works. That's the good part. That's the best part."

Raizen strained. A vein stood out at his temple. He poured everything into one more movement—one twitch of the trapped arm—and the filth held. His muscles burned against the lock. Nothing. His own certainty, his own perfect technique, had become the cage; every fiber he'd trained to strike was now the exact fiber the filth had seized.

He opened his mouth to speak—the first words of the whole fight—and only a low, controlled exhale came out. Even his voice was stuck behind the stillness.

Nofuqus crouched in front of him, face level, manic eyes bright. "You want to know the worst thing? I didn't even beat you." He tapped Raizen's frozen fist with one dirty finger. "*You* did. You were so sure. I just made sure the sure thing couldn't move."

The training hall stood silent except for the slow drip of filth off the mirrors and the faint, straining tremor running through Korutsuki Raizen's locked, immaculate frame. He remained upright—undefeated in form, defeated in motion—while Nofuqus Given capered a slow circle around him, giggling, leaving handprints on the glass.

"Good fight," Nofuqus said at last, cheerfully, wiping his palms on his own chest. "Very clean. Very *stuck*."

The recorded ending

This encounter ended with Nofuqus Given still standing.

This fictional story was generated by PicWar AI from player-created characters and a public battle for entertainment. It does not describe real people or events.

Would you rewrite this ending?

Create a hero who could challenge Nofuqus Given.

Start with a sketch or image, create your own hero in PicWar, then send it into a new battle story.

Keep reading

These characters return in other tales

Send another hero into the archive

Every tale on this shelf begins with a character someone imagined.

Stay here and keep reading, or use a sketch or image in PicWar to create a character who may enter a future story.

Create a character