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A revenge tale

Thrakûl, the Flame-Wrought VS Willfred, un espadachín "normal"

The wound was small—a thumb-length parting of the hide along Thrakûl's ribs, where Willfred's red-hilted blade had slid past a spike and found the seam between blackened plate and…

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The wound was small—a thumb-length parting of the hide along Thrakûl's ribs, where Willfred's red-hilted blade had slid past a spike and found the seam between blackened plate and burning flesh.

But it was enough.

Thrakûl felt it before he understood it. The cut did not sting. It *opened*. And through that opening, something older than the Hellfire Orc surged upward like a tide breaking a dam. The faint Elven traces beneath his ruined skin—forgotten, buried, never fully consumed—ignited all at once. Smoke poured from his nostrils in a black column. His burning eyes went white at the edges. The vast fiery shadow behind him convulsed, spread, and took shape: wings of cinder, a horned silhouette of living flame that stretched across the rain-slick courtyard and swallowed the grey light of the overcast sky.

The crowd of silhouettes at the courtyard's rim recoiled. Thunder rolled somewhere beyond the rooftops, and the drizzle turned to steam in a ten-foot radius around him.

Willfred did not flinch. He simply adjusted his grip on the crimson-stitched hilt, set his back foot against the wet stone, and watched.

"You should have stayed down," Thrakûl rumbled, and his voice carried two registers now—the brutal growl and something colder beneath it, elvish and precise. "The fire remembers every death. Yours is already written in it."

Willfred said nothing. He rarely did.


Thrakûl had learned from the last fight. He had replayed it a hundred times in the ash of his own thoughts: how the swordsman had simply *waited*, letting the flames spend themselves against a guard that never opened, then sliding a single thrust into the seam he had patiently widened. Patient. Defensive. Deadly.

Not this time.

Thrakûl came forward in a rolling tide of fire, and he did not stop. His clawed fist swept down; Willfred turned it aside with the flat of his blade, boots skidding across the wet cobbles—but the Orc was already swinging the other arm, already stepping into the space the parry had vacated. No pause. No breathing room. Every time the swordsman reset his stance, a wall of heat and iron was there to break it.

*Steel flows like water*, Willfred thought, and let the blade do what it knew. A low cut to the thigh—deflected. A thrust toward the throat—turned by a spike-plated forearm. He gave ground, methodical, angling his shoulders so the light of the burning shadow never blinded him entirely. The rain hissed into vapor around them; steam cloaked the courtyard; the grey crowd blurred into ghosts behind a veil of mist.

And through all of it, Thrakûl *watched*.

He watched how Willfred favored his right knee on the slick stone. How his parries always returned to the same guard, high and close. How his eyes tracked the hands, never the fire. How he never wasted a motion—because a normal man could not afford to.

"You count your breaths," Thrakûl said, pressing again, fire streaming from his knuckles. "Good. Keep counting. I have already counted them."


The decisive moment came without spectacle.

Willfred executed his finest work yet: a feint high, a rolling step inside the Orc's reach, and a thrust aimed precisely at the seam he had opened at the ribs—the same seam, the same wound, the killing discipline of a man who had ended a monster once and believed repetition was truth.

Thrakûl let the blade come.

He did not evade. He *closed*. His arm clamped down over the sword, trapping it against his own burning hide, and the fire drank the steel's momentum. Willfred's calm eyes widened a fraction—the first true expression he had shown all night—as he understood that the wound he had carved had not weakened his enemy. It had only let the enemy become *more*.

"You taught me," Thrakûl growled, wings of cinder flaring wide behind him, "that patience wins. So I took your patience. Now I have none left to give you."

His free hand seized the swordsman's collar and lifted him from the cobbles. The dark red scarf snapped in the updraft of heat. For one heartbeat, Willfred's boot found the Orc's forearm and he drove his pommel down into the burning wrist—a good strike, a clean strike, the strike of a professional to the very end.

It was not enough. It had never been enough, because Thrakûl had spent the entire fight earning exactly this grip.

The balrog-flame erupted from his fist.

The courtyard went white. When the light faded, the rain was falling again, unhindered, and the steam drifted apart like a curtain drawn back. Thrakûl stood alone at the center of the stones, chest heaving, the fiery shadow folding slowly back into the shape of a man-shaped thing. At his feet lay a red-hilted sword, its edge still wet, its owner's grip finally, genuinely, released.

The Orc bent and picked up the blade. He turned it once in the firelight, studying the seam where his own blood had dried along the steel—the seam that had remade him.

"Fire learns," he said to no one, to the crowd, to the rain. "You were only ever teaching it."

He closed his fist, and the sword's red hilt glowed, and then it was ash.

The recorded ending

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