A revenge tale
Kharon Kaine VS Nofuqus Given
The blood-red eclipse hung motionless over the ruined fortress as Kharon Kaine descended through the shattered stairwell, crimson blade humming in the dark. He had not forgotten…


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The blood-red eclipse hung motionless over the ruined fortress as Kharon Kaine descended through the shattered stairwell, crimson blade humming in the dark. He had not forgotten the defeat. The memory lived in his servos like a cold infection — the moment Nofuqus Given had swallowed his certainty and welded him into his own victory posture. A Sith assassin does not fail twice. Failure is death, and Kharon had no intention of dying today.
He found the creature three floors down, standing in a flooded antechamber where the drainage channels had long since clogged with rot. Nofuqus Given stood ankle-deep in the ruin, his filth-caked body trembling with gleeful anticipation, white briefs the only clean thing left on him. He spotted Kharon on the landing and erupted into a wet, high-pitched cackle.
"Back for the encore! The shadow returns to the scene of his own humiliation! Oh, I've been waiting — I've been *marinating* in anticipation!"
Kharon said nothing. He had learned that silence was its own weapon against a creature who fed on reaction.
He did not descend to the floor. He stayed on the elevated landing, blade angled low, studying the geometry of the chamber — the narrow stairs, the slick walls, the single window where eclipse light bled through in a red column. The fool had positioned himself in the lowest point of the room. That was a mistake. Kharon had spent a lifetime learning that the dark side rewards patience above fury.
Nofuqus read the hesitation and laughed harder. "Oh, he's *thinking* now! Last time he just swung that pretty red stick and I wore it like a scarf! Come down, come down, let's do the dance again!"
Kharon raised one hand. Not to strike — to call. The Force answered like a tide of black water, and the drainage channels beneath the creature's feet groaned. Ancient rust flaked away. The flood of filth that Nofuqus had spent days cultivating, the septic stew he used as armor and ammunition, began to churn upward — and then, under Kharon's will, it *moved*. Not toward the assassin. *Away* from the floor entirely, drawn up the walls in greasy ribbons, stripped from the chamber and hurled out through the broken window into the eclipse-lit air.
Nofuqus's cackle faltered for the first time. "Wait. Wait wait wait — that's *mine* —"
"You built your fortress out of filth," Kharon whispered, his voice carrying the weight of the dark side through the ruined hall. "So the dark side will take it from you."
The creature lunged up the stairs, manic and suddenly desperate, hands outstretched to grab and smear and contaminate. Kharon stepped back one level, letting the slope work against the climbing attacker. Nofuqus's bare feet slipped on stone the assassin had already purged clean. Each time he scrambled upward, Kharon withdrew two steps, forcing the creature to climb and climb and climb without ever reaching him.
"You're *running*!" Nofuqus shrieked, breathless between the wet sounds of his own failing grip. "The great Sith assassin *flees*!"
"No," Kharon said. "I am *placing* you."
On the fourth landing, the stairs ended at a narrow parapet open to the eclipse sky. Nofuqus clawed his way up, arms flailing, but there was nothing left for him to hold — Kharon had drawn every trace of the creature's ammunition out of the fortress and scattered it across the storm-wracked valley below. The chaos engine stood in the open air, stripped of his medium, his one true weapon.
Nofuqus looked down at his own gray-brown hands, then at the empty floor, then back at the hooded figure. For a moment his manic grin flickered into something almost weary. "You... you took my *stuff*. That's — that's not fair. That's not how the joke works."
"The joke is over," Kharon said.
He feinted left with the crimson blade. Nofuqus, still trying to absorb, still trying to convert certainty into paralysis, threw his body forward to embrace the strike as he had done before. But Kharon had expected the embrace. He had *invited* it. The instant the creature committed, the assassin dropped his own saber and pivoted — and instead of a grapple, he drove a Force-augmented palm strike into Nofuqus's center of mass. Not a killing blow. A *shove*. The dark side lent it weight far beyond any muscle, and Nofuqus Given, already lunging, already overcommitted on a narrow parapet with nothing beneath his feet but air and the long fall to the valley floor, found his momentum turned entirely against him.
He screamed — the first honest scream, not a taunt — as he tipped backward over the edge. His hands clawed at the stone lip. They found nothing. Kharon's cleanup had seen to that.
The creature fell, a white flash of briefs and flailing limbs against the red eclipse, and the storm swallowed him long before the ground did.
Kharon Kaine stood alone on the parapet, retrieving his saber from the flagstones with a quiet hum. He did not gloat. A Sith assassin does not celebrate — it survives. The dark side had given him patience, and patience had given him the geometry of the kill. He had not struck the creature's body. He had struck its *context*, the same weapon Nofuqus had once used against him, turned back with interest.
He looked down into the dark valley once, then turned and vanished into the ruined fortress, a shadow between worlds, leaving the eclipse to burn over an empty parapet.
The recorded ending
This encounter ended with Kharon Kaine still standing.
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